一 : 常见英文书信之二:感谢信
辉哥提示:
1、我说你们别光转载啊,赶紧复制粘贴下来,放到WORD上,打印下来,1个星期务必背完!
2、这些句子都是精华中的精华,对单选、完型、阅读都有帮助!
3、好,我们开始上课~
常见英文书信之二:感谢信
一、高分套路:(先学习文章思路,再学习怎么表达)
第一段:交代写信的目的;
第二段:回顾对方所作的事情;
第三段:强调事情的意义或愿意回报对方;
第四段:再次表达感谢和祝愿;
二、加分套话:(这些句子里面到处都是单词、句型和语法的亮点,一定要全部背过啊!!!!)
1.在心中我要为...向你表达我真挚的协议
Iwouldliketoconveyinthesefewlinesmyheartfeltthankstoyoufor…
2.非常感谢你的礼物,这是我收到的最好的礼物
Thanksalotforthegift.It'sthemostwonderfulgiftIhaveeverreceived.
3.借此机会感谢你给我们的及时帮助和支持
Iwouldliketotakethisopportunitytoexpressmygreatappreciationofyourtimelyhelpandassistance/support.
4.非常感谢你为帮助我们...所做的一切
Manythanksforallthegoodthingsyouhavedoneinhelpingusto…
5.我谨代表全家对...表示由衷的感谢
Onbehalfofmywholefamily,Iwouldliketoextendmysinceregratitudefor…
6.对你的帮助再次表示感谢
Thanksagainforyourkindhelp.
7.我的感激之情难以言表
Mytruegratitudeisbeyondanywords/description.
8.请接受我的谢意
Pleaseacceptmythanks.
9.对于你的帮助,我们每个人都心存感激
Yourhelpisverymuchappreciatedbyeachoneofus.
三、参考模板:(今天背过这套模板,可能下回考试就能照搬!)
Dear...,
第一段:交代写信目的
(1)Howareyoudoing?(2)Iamwritingthisletter/thesefewlinestoexpressmyheartfeltgratitude/thankstoyoufordoingsth.
注:
1、写感谢信时,大家一般都认识,所以这里没有写自我介绍;
2、第二个段落就是写信背景,所以第一段中连背景也省略了;
3、辉哥暑假班课上讲的是基本思路,后面具体讲文章类型之际是可以根据具体情况灵活变通的;
第二段:具体回顾对方所做的事情
(3)WhenI(看照片、看录像、看那段时间的日记、回忆那段经历),Ijustcan'thelpthinkingofyou/whatyouhavedoneforme.(4)Itwassokindofyouto(对方做的第一件事)(5)Besides,you(对方做的第二件事,注意,这件事一定要出人意料,比如突然送了你1个礼物之类的),whichreallysurprisedme.(6)Actually,Ishallalwaysremember(对方做的第三件事),consideringthat,(对方做的第三件事情的意义)(7)Nothingwillbeabletoeraseourwonderfulmemories,andIwillcherishthemforever.
注:
1、这个段是典型的T-E-C结构,你看出来了吗?
2、这个段落的“E”部分,辉哥没有使用课上讲的那些“典型”然而“刻板”的“过渡词”,而是对其中的过渡进行了更为灵活的处理,这些在后面的每个星期的讲解中都会有所体现。(当时讲那些“刻板”的“第一、第二、第三”的用法,只是让大家体会到过渡词是什么东东啦!辉哥的良苦用心有没有让你周围的空气变暖一摄氏度呢?)
3、如果对方没有做三件事,写两件也行,写一件也行——不要超字数过多就好啦!
4、辉哥个人体会:对语言的升级真的是永无止尽!刚才在第2条注释中,最后一句话我本来想写“辉哥的良苦用心有没有让你感到一丝温暖呢?”,然后一想,这样不具体啊——所以又改成“辉哥的良苦用心有没有让你感到一摄氏度的温暖呢?”,然后又一想,这样有歧义啊——于是终于改成了“辉哥的良苦用心有没有让你周围的空气变暖一摄氏度呢?”——各位,这就是作文啊!
第三段写法一:强调对方所作所为的意义
(8)Youhavenotonlydonesth(第1个意义),butalsosparedustheworryofsth(第二个意义).(9)Yourkindhelp/dedicationisverymuchappreciated,notonlybymyself,butalsobyourwholefamily/class/schoolaswell.(10)WordsfailwhenIwanttoexpressmygratitudetoyou.【9、10两句都属于“有用的废话”】
第三段写法二:表示愿意回报对方,并写出具体回报方式;
(8)Iwishtohavechancetoexpressmygratitudetoyou/torepayyou.(9)Iwillfeelveryhonoredandpleasedif(如果你能来我家做客、如果有事情需要我帮忙、如果你能来中国旅游...).(10)Wouldyoukindlyletmeknow(你的安排、你的决定...)?
注:一般2种写法中,按照试题的要求,写1种就行了,写2种的话字数有200多了!!!
第四段:再次表达感谢并祝愿;
(11)Thanksagainforwhatyouhavedoneforme/us.(12)Mayyoubeblessedineverythingyoudo.
注:最后一句话是典型的西方问候:“希望你在一切所行的事上得蒙祝福。”多么美好啊!
Yourstruly,
XXXX
三、经典例题
(一)假设你是李华,最近去英国参加了一起英语夏令营活动,住在Mr.Smith家中,他们提供了你吃、住、旅游方面的帮助,请写一封感谢信表达对他们的感谢。
内容要点:
1.感谢Smith夫妇;
2.你的感受;
3.邀请Johnson夫妇来华旅游;
注意事项:
1.词数120~150;
2.适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
DearMrandMrsSmith,
Howareyoudoing?IamwritingthesefewlinestoexpressmyheartfeltgratitudetoyouforofferingaccommodationwhenIwasinEngland.
WhenIlookatthosepictures,Ijustcan'thelpthinkingofyou.ItwassokindofyoutotakecareofmewhenIwasnotusedtotheweatherthere.Besides,youboughtChinesefoodforme,whichreallysurprisedme.What'smore,Ishallalwaysrememberthoseancientstoriesyoutoldme,consideringthat,theyhelpedmeknowmoreaboutyourcultureandhistory.Nothingwillbeabletoeraseourwonderfulmemories,andIwillcherishthemforever.
Iwishtohavechancetorepayyou.IwillfeelveryhonoredandpleasedifyoucancometoChinaforavisitandIwillbeyourguide.Wouldyoukindlyletmeknowifyoucanmakeit?
Thanksagainforwhatyouhavedoneforme.Mayyoubeblessedineverythingyoudo.
Yourstruly,
XXXX
【辉哥提示】模板不是唯一的选择,有的时候,虽然不按模板写,仍然能够写出功力强劲的作文,如下面这一篇:(希望你也能够背过啊!!!!!!)
(二)
题目:Whileyourfamilywasonvacation,yourfriend,Marylookedafteryourdog,Smart.Nowyoucameback,writealettertohertoshowyourgratitude.
Yourlettershouldbenolessthan100words.Youdon‘tneedtowritetheaddress.Don’tsigny[www.61k.com]ourownnameattheendoftheletter;use“LiMing”instead.
范文:
DearMary,
IamwritingtoexpressourheartfeltthanksforyourtakinggoodcareofSmartwhilewewereonholiday.
Hewassuchahappydogwhenwegothome.Weknewhemusthavehadlotsoflovingattention.Whenwepickeduphimfromthekennelinyourhomehewouldwhimperandcarryonforhours.
Younotonlysavedussomemoney,butalsosparedustheworryabouthimwhilewewereaway.Yourkindhelpisveryappreciated,notonlybySmart,butalsobyourwholefamilyaswell.Pleaseacceptourthanksagain.
Yourssincerely,
LiMing
四、作业(10•陕西)
假定你是李华。你们学校和一所美国中学签署了教师交流协议。在过去的一年里,你们的英文老师是来自这所中学的SueWood。不久前她返回美国任教。请你根据写作要点和要求给Sue写封电子邮件。
写作要点:
1.对她表达感谢之意;
2.介绍她离开后你自己及班里发生的事情;
3.希望了解她的近况。
要求:
1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。
2.短文词数不少于100(不含已写好的部分)。
3.内容充实,结构完整,语意连贯
4.书写须清晰、工整。
5.邮件中不能体现本人真实信息。
【辉哥提示】这篇文章里面就第一段算感谢信的东西,第二段和第三段不是——所以千万不要刻板地套用模板哦!!!!!!
二 : 英文感谢信
感谢信三 : 英文感谢信
1. Introduction 概述
在日常生活和工作中,感谢信应用 范围很广。当收到馈赠、邀请、赴宴、照顾、 款待、慰问、吊唁、祝贺时,写信道谢乃人 之常情。在商务活动中,对雇员的建议,客 户的订货,供应商的优质服务,银行、商会 或友邻的信息提供等等,均应写信致谢。感 谢信能帮助加强联系、增进友谊、树立企业 的良好形象。
感谢信应态度诚恳、热情洋溢,不能 过于简短,以免使收信人造成敷衍了事、 言不由衷的错觉。 感谢信通常包括如下内容:一是对对 方的馈赠、帮助、关心和邀请等表示由衷 的感谢,二是说明对方的馈赠、帮助、关 心和邀请等所起的作用和对自己的意义, 三是表示希望日后有机会定当答谢对方, 并在结尾再次致谢。
2.Commonly-Used Sentences on Letters of Thanks 感谢信常用句型
1) Thank you very much for… 2) Many thanks for your… 3) Please accept my sincere appreciation for××× 4) I am truly grateful to you for××× 5) It was good (thoughtful) of you ××× 承蒙好意(关心) ××× 6) You were so kind to send×××
7)Thank you again for your wonderful hospitality(盛情款待) and I am looking forward to seeing you soon. 8)I hope I can reciprocate (回报)your kindness when you come to ××× 9) Thanks a million ( or Thanks ever so much) 10) Oceans of thanks .(感谢之至) 11) I cannot tell you how much your letter delighted (愉快) (relieved, amused, enchanted 轻松) me. 12) Please accept my sincere appreciation for… 请接受我对……衷心感谢。
13) I sincerely appreciate… 14) I am very sincerely grateful to you for… 15) I wish to express my profound appreciation for… 我对……深表感谢。 16) Many thanks for your generous cooperation. 谢谢贵方的真诚合作。
3. Specimen 1)Thanks for Favor谢恩惠
Dear Mrs. Green: My daughter has written to tell that you have been very kind to her during her stay in New York. My husband and I deeply appreciate your Courtesy(对此深感谢意), and we do hope you’ll come to stay together with us for a few days when you are in Beijing. Thank you for your many kindness to Lin Fang. Sincerely yours, Li Lan
2.Thanks for Hospitability谢款待
Dear Prof. Smith, Many thanks for your hospitability and the honor you showed me during my recent visit to your country. It was thoughtful of you to introduce me to so many of your famous professors and learned scholars in your Country. I have learned a lot from them. I returned to China safe and sound last Friday, and have resumed my work now.
I hope you will some day visit our country with its ancient history and beautiful scenery, and give us some lectures on “ Modern English Literature”. Please have no hesitation in writing to me should you want me to do something for you in China. With best wishes, I remain.(祝好) Yours sincerely, David Li
3.T
hanks for Help
Dear Alice, I wish there were a better word than “thanks” to express my appreciation of your help in making the celebration of our School Founders’ Day(校庆庆祝会) a success. Thanks for giving me the thrill of bringing your wonderful work to the attention of the trustees at our celebration.(在 庆祝会上,您对校董事们的招待工作做得很出色,使我感动。 谢谢。) All my best wishes. Sincerely Salley
4. Thanks for Recommendation 谢推荐
Dear Professor Smith, I think you’ll be pleased to know that I have been hired as Human Resources Assistant manager(人力资源部助理 经理) of Huawei Co. I will begin to work on May 1st. Please accept my sincere thanks for your reference and your thorough coaching(推荐以及各方面的教诲) I received at Hunan University. With best wishes. Faithfully yours, Porsia Yang
Dear Alice, Many thanks for your coming to see me off at the airport. The warmth of friendship has accompanied me through the whole flight, and made my journey pleasant and comfortable. I arrived safely at Hong Kong this afternoon, and shall write you again later. Sincerely yours, Jack
6. Thanks for Dinner
Dear Mr. Song, Thank you for inviting me and some of my colleagues to dine with you last night. It was an enjoyable occasion and an excellent dinner. As you know, we value our long-established relationship with the People’s Republic of China, and with the Ministry of Foreign Trade(对外贸易 部) in particular, and look forward to doing more business with them and to many future years ahead of increased cooperation. Yours sincerely James
7.Thanks for Coming to the Hospital 谢探病
Dear Lucy, Thanks for your kind visit which has helped me to forget the lonesomeness and minimize the pain of my illness. Curiously enough, the doctor says that I am over the hump and should be improving steadily. It is nice to think that your friendship and comfortable remarks have contributed to my coming around.
The doctor assured me if such improvement continued, I should be able to leave the sickbed within a few days. You can imagine how the news has cheered me up. Sincerely yours, Jim
8. Thanks for Gifts
Dear Mr. Martin: I want to thank you for the beautiful roses you sent to my mother. She was very happy and pleased when she saw they were from you. I ‘m glad to say she is recovering, and I hope she will soon be able to leave the hospital. We both send you our warmest thanks for the flowers and your very kind wishes. Sincerely, John Granby
给你的现任老师写一封感谢信, 感谢他/她对你学习上的帮助,生 活上的关心。要求写80字以上。
Dear Mr. Young Thanks for inviting me to have dinner with you at your house last night. It’s hard to find another word to express my gratitude, please accept my sincerely word, thanks Thanks the Lord let me know you in such a hard time for me. Your kindness and warm-heart do make me know what a great perso
n you are. May the Lord be with you. You sincerely Weir
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