一 : 2013年中考英语作文解析

一、关注时事

H1N1流感

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根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文.所给英文提示词语供选用.请不要写出你的校名和姓名.

世界上已有许多国家发现了新型H1N1流感病毒(H1N1 flu virus)病例.据悉，人感染该病毒后会出现咳嗽、发烧、疲劳等症状.为了加强同学们的预防意识，(21世纪中学生英语报>正在举办征文活动，请你给该报投稿，描述感染该病毒的症状并谈一谈为了预防该病毒我们该怎么做，最后表达我们能战胜病毒的信心.提示词：cough, have a fever, feel tired, prevent, wash, exercise, sleep, believe

Nowadays, many countries in the world have found cases of the new H1N1 flu virus. It’s said that people with H1N1 flu virus will cough, have a fever and feel tired. To prevent the virus, we can do many things. Firstly, we’d better not go to places where there are many people. Secondly, we need to wash our hands often with soap and water, especially after we cough or sneeze. It's also a good habit for us to exercise regularly. It can not only help us keep fit but also improve our health against illness. And having a good sleep is important, too. People who are tired or under stress can get sick easily. And then, eat more fruit and vegetable to keep ourselves fit and strong. Last but not least, open the window and keep the air in the room fresh. If we all do these things, we will prevent the virus. So there is no need to be worried. I believe we will win through in the end.

上海世博会

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上海世博会对中国的影响

As we all know that 2010 World Expo will be held in Shanghai , this is the first time that China hosted the World Expo. The World Expo has a long history but it has never been held in Asia. So it is a great honor for our country. It is also a great honor for all the Asians. As a host city, Shanghai will have more chances to develop quickly. The theme of the Expo is "Better City, Better Life". We all really hope that Shanghai will become more exciting and attractive and that we can enjoy life to the fullest. Organizers expected to attract 70 million visitors from all over the world to attend, at the same time it is also the largest in the history of World Expo. It is a good chance for China to show its achievements in many fields.

玉树地震

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玉树地震

The earthquake in Yushu

An earthquake happened on April 14th in the Yushu county of Qinghai province. There are many people died in this earthquake. When we heard the news, we were all shocked and sad. But when I think of Wenchuan, I believe that people in Yushu are not alone, because we, all the Chinese, will be with them. We should try our best to help people in Yushu. I will take actions to help the people, such as donating money and things they need for them. And we should make friends with homeless children and cheer them up. If possible, I want to be a volunteer in Yushu and help them build the new house! I hope that they can overcome the disaster and lead happy lives in their rebuilt home soon.

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How to Survive an Earthquake

If earthquake happened, firstly, don't panic and calm down. Secondly, find some safe place to stay and don't run in such a hurry. If in the room, one should hide himself/herself under something hard, such as desk, table or even bed and keep away from shelf and cupboard, and never take a lift to go downstairs. If in the open air, find an open place and never get close to cars or waterside. Thirdly, we should help each other when we meet trouble. At last, no matter how strong the earthquake is, if only we have the belief to defeat it and never give up, we must be able to overcome any difficulties.

二、环保问题

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环境问题今天环境变得越来越糟糕,环境问题影响着人们的工作,学习,生活等,而我们的工作,生活,生产等又使环境污染越来越严重……,如何保护我们的环境?请以“ How to protect our environment? ”为题写一篇短文。提示:存在问题:1.水污染越来越严重;2.砍伐森林严重;3.大气污染严重;4.白色垃圾等。要求：如何改善/保护环境?至少：3至四个方面。

How to protect/save our environment/world?

As we all know, the environment around us is getting worse and worse /more and more seriously today. Water is polluted, we have no clean water to drink. Many trees are cutting down, some animals are getting less and less. Some factories are pouring dirty air into the sky. The population is increasing faster and faster, resources are getting less and less…etc. Not only does it affect our lives and health, it also has a great affection in the future. People’s health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution. Many people died of diseases. In order to live a better life, something must be done to stop the pollution. It’s our duty to protect our environment. We shouldn’t throw away rubbish everywhere. Trees are very helpful and important for us. We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthy in the future.

If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful. In a word, if everyone pays more attention to our environment, there will be less pollution and our life will be better. “There is only one earth”, I hope everyone will protect our environment well.

限塑令

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有关限塑令问题

根据国务院发布的"限塑令"，自2008年6月1日起，(中考英语作文www.yingyuzuowen.com)在所有超市、商场实行塑料购物袋有偿使用制度，超市、商场一律不得免费提供塑料购物袋。请你写一篇英语短文，要求包括以下内容：

现状：目前中国每天消费近30亿个塑料袋，造成了严重的资源浪费和环境污染;

限塑令的意义：减少塑料袋使用量，提高公众的环保意识;

提倡：重拎布袋子，重提菜篮子。

参考词汇：禁令 ban 意识 awareness 提倡 advocate

The problem of "white pollution" caused by used plastic is becoming increasingly serious, in which plastic shopping bags play an important role. In China about three billion plastic shopping bags are consumed every day, which results in a great waste of resources and heavy environmental pollution. Luckily, the government has put a nationwide ban on the use of free plastic bags, demanding that all stores and supermarkets not provide customers with free plastic bags after June 1. I agree with the rule, which people can’t get the free plastic bags in the shops, supermarkets. It advocates people to use their cloth bags and baskets. It’s good for our environment. So I hope all the students in our class stop using the plastic bags, and to use our own cloth bags. I hope we can take care of our environment. Let’s make our world more and more beautiful.

节约用水

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节约水是我们每个人的责任

As we know, water is very important to man, we can’t live without water. The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less. But some people don’t care about it. They waste a lot of water in their daily life. Even worse, they pour dirty water into rivers. They throw rubbish into rivers, too. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. Something must be done to stop the pollution. And I think it’s a great shame to waste while millions are in great need of water. I think what we can do is that we have to save every drop of water as possible as we can. For example, we must turn off the tap immediately after we use it. We can use a basin to wash our hands and faces. It’s also a good idea to encourage my friends and family members to join me! Only in this way can we live happily. If we don’t save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us. I believe if everyone makes a little effort, we can make a big difference.

低碳生活

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现在全世界都在倡导“低碳生活”(low-carbon life)，即：降低二氧化碳的排放，采取低能量、低消耗、低开支的生活方式。低碳生活对我们大家都有好处，请你写一篇短文向一家英文报社投稿。内容包括：你的具体做法、你的感受以及建议。

提示词语：be good for, everyone, ride a bike, think, make a difference, environment, suggest, reuse

Low-carbon life is good for everyone. To help with the environment, I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car. Besides, I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom. I think it’s my duty to live a low-carbon life. And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment. So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible. And we’d better not spend much money on expensive clothes. If everyone does something for the environment, I believe the earth will be a better place.

三、提出建议

学习

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根据中文提示和英文书信内容，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的回信，信的开头和结尾已经给出，其字数不计入所完成的回信内。

假如你叫Zhang Fang，是美国中学生Lucy的笔友，你收到了她的电子邮件。请根据她来信的内容写一封回信。针对她的困惑，谈谈你的看法，同时提出一些建议，并表达对她的祝愿。

Dear Zhang Fang,

I have been in this school for two years. My school’s not too bad. But I haven’t got used to it. Some of the teachers are very good, especially my science teachers. They try to make lessons interesting. I like to have their classes and spend much time on it. So I usually get ‘A’ in science exams. But I don’t like having English and history classes. There are too ma［www.61k.com］ny things to memorize and they’re so boring. Besides, it seems that the teachers can only read again and again. They don’t try to make lessons interesting. Whenever the lessons start, I feel sleepy. I often get ‘C’ in the exams, sometimes ‘D’.

The final exam of this term is coming. What shall I do? Could you give me some advice?

Yours，

Lucy

Dear Lucy,

I’m very happy to hear from you. Don’t worry too much. Many students have the same problem like you. I think it’s very common for students to dislike memorizing. Here’s my advice. But in fact English and history are not as boring as you think. If you try the following things, you may find they are interesting and you will not feel sleepy in class again.

First you had better learn the new lessons by yourself and write down the difficult points before lessons. It can make you become interested in what the teachers say in class. Second you should listen carefully and try to answer the teachers’ questions. It can help you understand better and memorize more quickly. What’s more, you also need to review the lessons regularly after class. If you still feel unhappy, you can have a talk with your teacher to ask for help. I really hope my advice can help you out and get ‘A’ in English and history exams. Keep trying, I believe you will enjoy the school life and make great progress with your study.

Yours,

Zhang Fang

生活

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假如你是韩梅，下面是一封你的笔友Alice 给你发来的e-mail, 请根据e-mail的内容，给他写一封回信。与她交流看法，并帮她排忧解难。

提示词语：listen to, mother’s love, care about, communicate with, get along with, smile

Dear Han Mei ,

I’m afraid I’ve got a big problem recently. My mother talks too much to me. She always tells me, “Be careful while crossing the street.” “Put on more clothes.” “Did you do a good job at school?” and so on. I’m annoyed(烦恼). What shall I do? Can you give me some ideas?

Alice

Dear Alice,

As a teenager, I met the same problem as you. But now I can get on/ along better with my mother. Here are some ideas for you.

Your mother talks much, because she cares about you. I'm sure your mum loves you very much. Maybe it shows your mother’s love. So I think you should listen to her. If your opinions are different from your mother’s, you can communicate with her, and tell her what you’re thinking about. If your mother doesn’t take your advice, just keep silent and give her a smile.

I hope what I say here can help you a lot.

Han Mei

娱乐

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根据中文提示和英文书信内容，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的回信。(信的开头和结尾已给出，其字数不计入所完成的回信内)。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

75.中学生学习时间长、大力大，专家建议学生每天课后应采取适当的方式放松自己。为此，不同的同学有不同的放松方式，有的爱看电视，有的听音乐，有的做运动…请你谈谈你通过哪些方式放松自己并说说原因，谈谈你的感受。

提示词语：relax, TV, music, think

The Senior High School Entrance Examination is coming. In order to make a success in the exam I think it’s high time for us to relax a little. Or we’ll be too nervous to work well in the exam.

In order to relax ourselves, we can turn to some of our hobbies, different students have different ways --- Some watch TV, some listen to music… But for me I enjoy taking exercise most. Whenever I feel tired, I always spend an hour (in) walking or jogging in the park. Besides, I also play table tennis with my friends after class. In my opinion, taking exercise can not only rest our brains and eyes but also help build our bodies. I think it’s really helpful to both my health and my study. I hope all of my classmates can join me in getting relaxed. I wish you all every success in the coming examination!

运动

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假如你叫李飞，是学校“校园英语报”的编辑。你收到你同学张丽的姐姐的来信。请根据这位姐姐的要求，给张丽写一封回信。

Dear Editor,

I am really worried about my sister, Zhang Li. She always watches TV or reads books in her free time. She doesn’t like going out to exercise. I’m afraid that she will be not strong enough. Could you write to her to tell her the importance of doing exercise and give her some advice?

A worried sister

Dear Zhang Li,

Your sister is worried about you very much. Because you don’t take any exercise in spare time. I think health is very important to us teenagers. Either study or work is based on strong body. Doing sports every day helps us keep healthy and energetic. If we don't take any exercise, we may feel tired and get sick easily. So you should go out instead of staying at home. There are many kinds of sports you can do, such as running, swimming and ball games. Just remember "Exercise one hour a day, keep illness away."

Good luck!

Yours,

Li Fei

四、多彩校园

学校简单介绍

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在一次英语班会上，老师请同学们以Proud of My School 请根据下面所给的提示写一篇发言稿。内容包括学校面貌，你在校的活动，以及你喜欢学校的原因。

提示词：big\small, trees, play games, family, be kind to, be\feel proud of

Proud of my school

My school is very big with several tall buildings. We have a beautiful playground with lots of trees around it. There are many flowers everywhere.

My busy school life always makes me happy. I have lots of fun at school. I not only have all kinds of classes, but also take part in colorful activities after classes. I play games and do lots of sports, like playing basketball, football and table tennis.

I love my school because it’s like a big family. The students are friendly and the teachers in my school are as kind to us as our parents. I feel proud of my school because it is one of the best schools in my heart. I'm leaving my school. I'll never forget the days I've spent here.

友情至上

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假设你叫Liu Yan，初中三年，你与同学们在一起学习、参加各种活动，相互帮助，彼此之间建立了深厚的友谊.校园网的英语论坛开辟了 “Thank you letter” 专栏.请按下面的要求给你的同学Ling Feng写一封感谢信.注意：1.这封信要表达你对Ling Feng的感谢;2.信中要简述感谢Ling Feng的原因，适当举例，并谈谈自己的感受;提示词语：thank you, at the end of , kind, forget, help… with, stay in touch

Dear Ling Feng,

I would like to thank you at the end of our middle school education. You have been very kind and helpful since we knew each other.

You have given me so much help that I will never forget. Last term, I caught a bad cold and had to stay at home for a week. When I was worrying about the lessons, you came to my home after school and helped me with every subject. With your help, I didn’t fall behind others. Since then, we have become very close friends. I think I’ll try to help others just like you.

Thank you again. Even though we may go to different schools, I’ll always stay in touch with you. I wish you success for the future.

Yours,

Liu Yan

课余活动

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体育锻炼与参加夏令营

Most of us spend one or two hours on sports one week, some do less than one hour. As for me, most of my sports time is for running. Sometimes playing basketball with my friends is also fun for me. I think it’s necessary for everyone to go out to do sports because it’s good for our health and study. And I’d love to take part in the summer camp. First we’d better hold some parties with foreign students in order to know each other better. Next we can visit some museums, places of interest to open our eyes. Finally I hope we will have a chance to live in foreign families. I think it’s a good way to understand the different cultures between different countries. I really want to make friends with foreign students because we’re in the same world. At the same time, the activities can help us relax ourselves after the examinations and improve our English.

运动会

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一家英文报社正在举办征文活动，请你积极参加.题目是“一次难忘的运动会”.内容要求：你或你的朋友参加了什么项目，结果怎样，感觉如何?提示词语：year, take part in, field event (relay race, high jump, long jump, shot put, excited, take the first prize.

This year, I took part in the relay race, I was running the last lap. It was the final event on sports meet. Everyone was paying attention. All the runners got ready at the starting line.

As soon as the race began, everyone was too excited to stop cheering. When it was my turn, I could feel the Class 4’s runner catch up with me. So I try my best to run faster, finally, our class won the first prize in the most exciting event.

I was happy that I won another prize for my class. This is the most unforgettable sports that I had.

毕业感想

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初中生活马上就要结束了，三年的初中生活一定给你留下了很多挥之不去的回忆。请你给大家讲1个最值得你回忆的故事。包括时间、人物、事情经过和事后你的感想(请不要写出真实的学校名称以及真实姓名)。

提示词供参考。three years, memories, one of, one day, think, happy/ sorry

How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you. I had so many memories in three years’ life. On of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of her students. I’ve learned a lot from her. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others.

五、发表观点

假期利弊

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2008年政府取消了“五一”黄金周(“May golden week”)，但是，最近有些人又提出要恢复7天的长假.同学们也在校园网的“自由论坛”上展开了激烈的讨论.请你选用下面表格所提供的信息，写一篇短文，谈谈恢复长假的利与弊，并简述你的观点，给出一至两条理由.

Advantages Disadvantages

have a good rest

spend more time …with …

… cause a lot of trouble…

be crowded everywhere…

…

In 2008, ‘May golden week’ was canceled, but this year people have discussed the problem whether we should renew ‘May golden week’ or not.

Some people think the 7-day holiday is very important. Firstly, we could have a good rest and refresh ourselves after several months of hard work. Secondly, we could spend more time staying with our family. Thirdly, we will be able to use the one-week vacation to travel to some farther places such as foreign countries.

However, other people hold the opposite view. They think it causes a lot of problems. It may lead to traffic jam and visitors will not enjoy themselves if the travelling spots are over-crowded.

As a student, I prefer a 7-day holiday. Not only can I sleep well and do exercise, but also I can read some interesting books. How I wish a 7-Day holiday would come soon and we will have a 7-day holiday then!

公共规则

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It’s not allowed to throw litter anywhere in the public places. Everyone should obey the rules. Speaking loudly in the reading room is seemed to be very rude. Remember not to do anything that might make other people uncomfortable. We should stand in line when we are waiting for the bus. Try hard to give up the bad habits and develop good ones. We should respect the senior people and talk to them politely. Especially, we should give our seat to old people or women with babies on the bus. I think helping others can not only make us happy but also help us get more experience in life. Please cherish the public property.

使用手机

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关于中学生使用手机

赞成意见：1.现在是信息社会，手机是最快的信息交流的工具之一。2.应充分利用好手机。如偶遇突发事故，可立即拨打手机求助。3.可在每天学习之余利用手机游戏放松一下自己。4.只要正确使用好手机，紧跟时间并无过错，追求时尚可以理解，但学习是首要任务。 反对意见：1.学校已提供了公共电话，因此手机并不能带来更多的方便，而且花费较多。2.若课堂接听手机会影响上课。3.学生玩手机游戏或接发短信，将无法集中精力学习。

Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students. Some think it is good for students to bring a mobile phone. But some people do not think so. They think it is bad for students to bring a mobile phone. Because the students will use mobile phones to play games, sent text messages, watch movies, etc which will do harm to their study. And if a mobile phone ring in the class, the teacher and students would be disturbed. In my opinion, we can bring mobile phones to school.

As we know, the 21st century is a modern age and full of information. A mobile phone is one of the quickest tools for us to exchange information. The mobile phone is a fashionable and useful invention, so we ought to make the best use of it. Suppose there’s a sudden accident, it is more convenient for us to dial for help immediately. There’re also some games in the mobile phone. We can relax ourselves by playing them when we’re tired of our studies. In my opinion, it’s not wrong to follow the fashion, but the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way and do not disturbed others.

网络游戏

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沉迷网络游戏

题目：李小虎沉迷于电脑游戏中，影响了学习。作为他的好朋友，你打算怎么帮他呢?

请用下面所给的提示词写一篇短文。

提示词： give up concentrate on be (become)interested in

Li Xiaohu spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others. As a good/close friend of his, I must do something to help him.

First, I think it’s very important for him to learn lessons well. He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games. Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes. So he must give it up. I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games. And then I'll ask him to concentrate more on his study. Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects. I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying. At the same time, I'll ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too. If I try these, I'm sure he will make great progress soon.

电视节目

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As we know, TV plays an important part in our daily life. It's quicker and more convenient to get information from TV than from newspapers. It is an important tool to spread culture and information, including foreign languages. And we can learn much knowledge from TV which we can’t get from books. What’s more, good TV programs can keep us wise and healthy. With TV, children can grow up happily. So it is not reasonable to forbid students to watch TV. But watching TV too long is not good. Sitting in front of TV all day does harm to our eyes and wastes our time for study.

So we should take a correct attitude to students watching TV.

六、饮食与健康

饮食安全

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假如你是一所国际学校校办英文杂志的学生编辑.你看了下面这封信后，也想写一篇关于该信的读后感，内容要点包括：你对此事件的看法;解释你的理由并提出你的建议;向受害者表达尽快康复的祝愿.

Today, I received the reader's letter. I was shocked at it. Personally speaking, I think we should pay more attention to the food safety. The government must make some necessary laws. What's more, some businessmen shouldn't be only interested in making money. They must care about people's health. We'd better not eat anything in dirty places though some food is delicious, because eating unhealthy food does harm to our health.

Finally, I hope the family in the accident will get better soon.

减肥问题

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假设你是《21世纪中学生英语报》“heart to heart”专栏的编辑。下面是你收到的一位中学生的来信，请你根据他来信的内容写一封回信，针对他的问题。

Dear Xiaowei,

Weight problem is quite common among teenagers everywhere. So I don’t think you have much to worry about. Here are my suggestions. Eating late at night is OK, but you should to eat more fruit and vegetables, which are good for you. Also, when you are free, you’d better do more exercise. Running is great. You don’t like running alone, but what about running with your friends? Or you can do some team sports like basketball. I’m sure your friends will be willing to help you lose weight. I hope you have as much success in losing weight as you have had in your studies. “Believe myself, and I will win.” It’s really important for us when we meet difficulties. Don’t lose heart; I’m sure you will succeed one day.

Good luck.

Editor

七、中国城市与传统节日

介绍首都北京

★ 范文25.

请你阅读你的加拿大网友Tommy的e-mail，根据e-mail的内容，给他写一封回信.

Dear Li Lei,

I haven't heard from you for a long time. I'm glad to tell you that I'll visit Beijing this summer vacation. It is said that Beijing is a great city with a long history and more changes have taken place since the 2008 Olympic Games. I would like to know something about Beijing, such as places of interest, the environment, traffic and people there.

I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours,

Tommy

Dear Tommy,

I'm glad to know you will come to Beijing.

Beijing, the capital of China, is one of the largest cities in the world. There are many places of interest, such as the Summer Palace, the Forbidden City and the Great Wall. All of them are beautiful and well-known to the world. Great changes have taken place in Beijing since we successfully held the 2008 0lympic Games.

Now, people pay more attention to the environment. More trees and flowers have been planted. For the traffic, it is very convenient for people to travel around Beijing, because several new subway lines have been built. If you come to Beijing, you will find people here are very friendly and helpful. What's more, a lot of people can speak English. Beijing is really an attractive city with a long history.

I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours,

Li Lei

★ 范文26.

根据中文大意和英语提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给英文提示词供选用。注意：不要写出你的真实姓名和校名。

假设你是刘伟，你的美国朋友MIKE 想通过你了解中国的传统节日。请你根据提示，给Mike 写一封e-mail，向他介绍我国传统节日春节的情况。

内容提示：1.春节是中国最重要的传统节日;2.春节期间人们的主要活动(节前、除夕、节日期间) Spring Festival, traditional, decorate, on the eve of the festival, get together, set off fireworks, lucky money

Dear Mike,

How are you? I’m really glad that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals. There are many traditional festivals in China, such as Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Day and so on. I’d like to introduce the Spring Festival to you. Spring Festival is the most important traditional holiday in China. It usually lasts for 15 days.

Days before the festival, people clean their houses. They think cleaning sweeps any bad luck. They decorate their houses with paper cuts. On the eve of the festival, family members get together and have big meals. Then they watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV. At midnight, they set off fireworks to welcome the new year. During the festival, kids get lucky money from old people. People visit their relatives and friends. They wish each a happy year and good luck. How happy we are.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Liu Wei

八、名言警句

01. Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧.

02. Time is money. 时间就是金钱

03. Easier said than done. 说来容易做来难

04. Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成.

05. Look before you leap. 三思而后行.

06. Knowledge is power. 知识就是力量

07. God helps those who help themselves. 自助者天助.

08. Nothing is impossible to a willing heart. 心之所愿，无事不成

09. It’s never too old to learn. 活到老，学到老

10. No pains, no gains. 不劳无获

11. Once in a blue moon. 千载难逢

12. To make the impossible possible. 将不可能变为可能

13. Failure is the mother of success. 失败乃成功之母

14. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情

15. First things first. 先做重要之事

16. Great minds think alike. 英雄所见略同

17. Rome was not built in a day. 成功并非一朝一夕的事

18. All that glitters is not gold. 闪光的未必都是金子

19. East or west, home is the best. 金窝银窝不如自家草窝

20. Time and tide wait for no man. 时间不等人

21. There is but a secret to success—Never give up! 成功只有1个秘诀—永不放弃!

22. Where there is life, there is hope. 有生命必有希望

23. Beauty will buy no beef. 漂亮不能当饭吃

24. Better late than never. 迟做总比不做好

25. Every little helps. 点滴都有用;积少成多

26. The shortest answer is doing. 最简短的回答就是行动

27. No news is good news. 没消息，就是好消息

28. Well begun, half done. 好的开始是成功的一半

29. All for one, one for all. 人人为我，我为人人

30. One false step will make a great difference. 失之毫厘，谬以千里

31. Facts speak louder than words. 事实胜于雄辩

32. As the tree, so the fruit. 种瓜得瓜，种豆得豆

33. To live is to learn; to learn is to better live. 活着为了学习，学习为了更好的活着

34. Like and like make good friends. 趣味相投

35. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. 只学习不玩耍聪明的孩子也变傻.

九、书面表达的考点讲解和训练

【考点扫描】

书面表达是每年中考必考题型，是考查学生交际能力的1个重要组成部分。书面表达通常有3种形式：

1、书信、日记、通知、留言、假条;

2、看图作文;

3、根据汉语提示作文。

无论是那1种书面表达形式，考生所写的短文都要紧扣主题、文理通顺，要素完整，语言准确、得当、格式正确、无大、小写和拼写错误，标点符号正确，能达到交际目的。

【名师解难】

一. 训练方法

1. 记。认真系统复习和背诵基础知识和优美的句子、句型。中国有句古话，叫“熟读唐诗三百首，不会吟诗也会作”。同样，要使自己具有较强的写作能力，首先应该熟读和背诵一些句型和短文。许多同学写出来的语言根本不符合英语的语言习惯，相当一部分人有对照中文逐字翻译的不良习惯，不去理会中英文的差异。大量的背诵和阅读是提高写作能力的有效办法，同学们若有大量的现成语言积累在脑海里，自己写起文段来，即可做到脱口而出，或是模仿、套用，甚至发挥。

2. 练。每练一篇书面表达题，都要真正学到一点东西，不可贪多而边学边忘。平时可以采用循序渐进、灵活多样的练习方式。从根据提示词写单句开始，到写单句，然后到写几句话，最后到写流利的文段。尽量尝试多种形式的写作，如短信、说明、通知、便条、明信片、看图写作、根据表格或记录写短文等。

3. 写。要进行实战写作。要求自己在20分钟内写出100个词的短文，并且质量高、内容全、形式正确。这样形成习惯，考试时就能得心应手。

二. 应试策略

1. 审题目：要切中题意。《中考考试说明》指出，书面表达要切中题意。怎样才能切中题意?就是要认真审题，看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出1个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。

2. 圈要点：防止遗漏要点。要点是给分的1个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。

3. 列提纲：为写作做好准备。根据文章要点短文的中心思想将主要句型、关键词语记下，形成提纲。

4. 定基调：定出时态、人称、顺序、开头、结尾。

5. 写全文：写短文时要做到以下6个方面：

(1)避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。

(2)多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。

(3)注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。

1)语态、时态要准确无误。

2)主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。

3)注意人称代词的宾格形式。

4)注意冠词用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能写成a。

5)注意拼写、标点符号和大小写，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。

(4)描写人物时，要生动具体，例如：

1)外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。

2)服饰颜色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。

3)内心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。

4)感情描写：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。

5)动作描写：come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。

(5)上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则，因此同学们应把写好的句子，根据故事情节，事情发生的先后次序(时间或空间)，使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法：

1)表示并列关系的：and, as well as, or… 2)表示转折关系的：but, yet, however… 3)表示时间关系的：when, while, after, before, then, after that… 4)表示因果关系的：so, therefore ,as a result… 5)表示目的的：in order to, in order that , so as to, so that… 6)表示列举的：for example , such as… 7)表示总结性的：in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking…

(6)不会表达，另辟蹊径。中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好，造复合句容易出错，容易被扣分，阅卷场上有句话：“错误面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。

6.改病句：认真检查，改正错误。中考作文时，由于时间紧、内容多，同学们出错在所难免。因此，改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分，根据错误多少来扣分。因此，中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手：

1)格式是否有错。

2)拼写有无错误。

3)语言是否用错。

4)时态、语态错误。

5)标点错误。

6)人称是否用错。

三. 注意事项

书面表达要特别注意书写工整，卷面整洁。每年阅卷老师在十来天的时间里要看十几万考生的作文，工作量之大，时间之紧，可想而知。书写是否工整，卷面是否整洁与得分高低直接有关。

【中考范例】

VII. 书面表达

假如你叫张强。请根据下面美国朋友Bob的来信内容，结合你自己的情况写一篇语言连惯、符合逻辑的英文回信。?

要求：1. 认真阅读来信的内容，从中获得你需要的信息。?

2. 词数：80左右。回信的开头、结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

注意：回信中不得出现你的真实地址和所在学校的名称。?

Dear friend,?

Hello!I’m your new friend. My name is Bob. I’m fifteen. I’m American. I live in New York.?

I am a middle school student. I’m good at maths. It is very interesting. My favourite sport is basketball. And I am not only a basketball fan but also a good player. I like pop music. My friends and I often sing pop songs together.?

After school, I am interested in getting on-line. I have known a lot about China from the Internet. Now I’m learning Chinese. I hope I will visit your country one day.?

Please write to me and tell me something about your life. I’m looking forward to hearing from you.?

Yours,?

Bob?

Dear Bob,

Yours,

Zhang Qiang

【解析】根据前面提到第6个步骤，我们来写一下这篇书面表达。

1.审题目：通过审题目我们可以知道：本篇书面表达应是写一封回信，写信人是张强，收信人是Bob，信的内容应是介绍张强自己的情况。

2. 圈要点：根据来信判断，写回信必须包括以下要点：1、收到对方的来信;2、愿意和对方交朋友;3、自己的姓名、年龄和住址;4、自己的身份、特长和爱好; 5、自己的希望。

3、列提纲：1. got your letter 2. glad to be your friend 3. name, zhang Qiang, fifteen, live in Shaanxi 4. a middle school student, like English, like sports, good at drawing, 5. hope we’ll meet in China

4、定基调：1. 时态：收到来信用一般过去时，介绍情况用一般现在时，希望用一般将来时。2. 人称用第一人称。3.可按提纲的顺序来写。4. 开头和结尾题目已经给出。

5、写全文：

Dear Bob,

I got your letter yesterday. I’m very glad to be your pen friend. My name is Zhang Qiang. I’m fifteen years old, too. I live in Shaanxi.

I’m a middle school student, too. I like English and physics very much. I also like sports, but I’m good at drawing. I know a little about America. Could you tell me something more about your country in your next letter?

I hope we’ll meet in China some day. I’m sure we’ll have a good time together.

Please write (to) me soon.

Yours,

Zhang Qiang

6、改病句：认真复查一边，如有错误，加以改正。

二 : 中考作文得分点完全解密：一类文解析

　　(一)别人为(地)缩短你的助跑线

　　今年五一节放假期间，我们全家游览了位于市郊外的动物园。在天鹅馆，我发现了一个奇怪的现象，那就是，几只天鹅在没有栅栏和护网的并不很大的池塘里，竟能非常安闲地生活而不飞走。(“奇怪”一词用得好，正因为好奇，才促使“我”探究下去。)问爸妈(“问”前应加上主语“我”。)，爸妈也不明白这是为什么。不得已，我们找到管理员向他问个究竟。听管理员说，天鹅在展翅高飞之前，必须有一段足够长的水面供其滑翔，如果滑翔的助跑线长度太短，天鹅就难以施展它拥抱蓝天的理想，久而久之，天鹅便会丧失飞翔的信念，甚至丧失飞翔的本领。而这几只天鹅(删去“而”，衔接更自然)，就是因为没有了飞翔时所必需的足够长的助跑线，才会在没有栅栏和护网的并不很大的池塘里，非常安闲地生活而不飞走。(管理员的话解开了我们的疑窦，同时也引出了“我”的思考，揭示和证明了全文的中心观点――别人为地缩短你的助跑线。)

　　听了管理员的解说，我很为那几只天鹅惋惜。同时我想，生活中何尝没有人为地缩短实现理想的助跑线而落得个一事无成的可悲下场之人？(由鸟及人，联系自然贴切，为下文进一步论证观点作了很好的过渡。)

　　北宋著名文学家王安石就曾写过一篇《伤-仲永》的名文。文中说，金溪县有个叫方仲永的小孩，他家世世代代以种田为业。方仲永五岁时，便能作诗，并且诗的文采和寓意都很好。全县的人对此感到很惊讶，慢慢地都把他的父亲当作上宾看待，有的还拿钱给他们。他的父亲认为这样有利可图，便每天拉着方仲永四处拜见县里有名望的人，表演作诗。最后，方仲永的聪明才智却完全消失了。(用方仲永的例子来证明观点比较贴切，只是有点陈旧。)

　　分析方仲永聪明才智完全消失的根本原因，无非是方仲永的父亲未能重视对他进行必要的后天教育，人为地缩短了方仲永真正成才所必需的足够长的助跑线的缘故。(有例有析，一语中的。)

　　近日，中央电视台《新闻调查》栏目讲述了这样一个故事：1983年出生的魏永康，两岁就认识了1000多个汉字四岁掌握了初中的全部知识，八岁上了重点高中，十三岁以高分考取了重点大学，十七岁考上了中国科学院的硕博连读，但却在十九岁的时候因生活自理能力太差而退学。(又是一个当代的方仲永式的悲剧！增强了观点的现实意义。)

　　这个故事的魏永康，只有超乎常人的学习能力，却缺少做人一定要有的生活自理能力。这也是他和他的家人，人为缩短了他成才所必需的足够长的助跑线而造成的恶果。(两个事例，一古一今，一是环境所迫，一是自身因素，两相对立，十分巧妙，有力地证明了中心论点。)

　　同学们，难道你不想让自己成才吗？那么，就请千万别人为(地)缩短你的助跑线！(反问有力，号召自然，照应标题，强化论点。)

　　【说长道短】

　　得分点：文章标题揭示了中心论点“别人为(地)缩短你的助跑线”后，正文先用天鹅缩短助跑线就不能飞翔的事例说明了论点；接着，作者列举一古一今现实生活中的两个典型论据，对中心论点进行了充分的论证，使文章有了积极的现实意义；结尾提出号召，强化论点。

　　提升点：主要着力点就放在中心和材料的处理上：如果论据的时代感再强一些，注意正反对比论证，那么中心会更突出，说服力会更强。

　　(二)助跑线上须卖力

　　现象名称：小球运动

　　现象描述：将一大小适中的小球，放在足够宽阔的地面上。如果不对它施加外力，那么它就会稳稳地呆在地面上；当对它施加的外力大于它所受到的阻力时，小球便会朝着外力的方向移动，且移动的速度和其受到的外力成正比；当对其施加的外力超过小球本身重力和它所受到阻力的总和的时候，小球便会从这_刻飞起来，而飞起来的高度和远度也与其所受到的外力大小成正比。

　　(用记录现象的形式扣题开篇，并用物理知识对运动现象进行描述，可谓别具一格。)

　　同类现象：

　　示例一：人的腿部只有用上足够大的力气才能走动，加大用力到一定程度后人自然就会跑起来。

　　示例二：宇宙飞船到广袤的宇宙空间去的时候，若缺少自身所携带的强大动力源的支持，那么其结果是不堪设想的。

　　(由此及彼，列举同类现象，强化对中心的论述，增强文章说服力。)

　　现象拓展： -

　　示例一：上海液压泵厂工人李斌，本来只是个技校毕业生，可他硬是通过刻苦努力，获得了大学本科文凭，成为上海乃至全国职工中唯一具有工程师和高级技师双项职称的智能型工人。十年里，他完成新产品开发项目55项，为企业创造了2100多万元的经济效益。有眼力的德国专家甚至还出高薪聘他到国外工作……

　　示例二：许振超是青岛港前湾集装箱码头公司桥吊队队长。作为一个“老三届”出身的普通工人，他始终站在时代的前列，顺应社会发展的潮流不断努力提高自己。他不仅没有被时代淘汰，而且屡屡永挑大梁，由一名普通工人，逐步成长为令世界航运界敬佩的一流桥吊专家。许振超带领的桥吊队，还创造出了每小时381自然箱的码头装卸效率，被交通部认定为世界最新记录。

　　(主体部分，两组现象，一简一繁，由“现象”及人，逐步拓深。不过，两组现象都只摆出事例，缺少必要的议论。)

　　最终结论：处于助跑线上的力求发展和进步的事物都要拼尽全力才行，这是它们实现飞翔梦想的关键！

　　友情提示(或“自我暗示”)

　　同学们，今天的中考使我们站在了通向高中的助跑线上，我想，没有一个同学不希望自己“高飞”起来，那么，就请用你最大的努力去拼搏吧！

　　(总结全文，再次对中心加以结论性阐述，使文章俨然成为一个事体。)

　　【说长道短】

　　得分点：新颖的构思和独特的论证艺术。不了说清标题提出的“助跑线上须卖力”的道理，文章别具匠心地分开条款，先从司空见惯的一个现象(小球运动)说起，继而在罗列两个“同类现象”的基础上，又对这一现象进行了巧妙拓展，较好地凸现了本文的写作目的。结尾的“最终结论”对全文作了恰到好处的总结，使文章的结构完整紧凑，“友情提示”则增强了文章的针对性。

　　提升点：美中不足也是在其说理论证上，从全文的主体看，似乎都在摆事实、列现象，偏偏少了议论文所必须的以“理”服人。不妨在“现象拓展”后面加上个“原理分析”之类，来个理性思考，挖一挖深层内涵，这样，主旨就会更鲜明、更深刻。

三 : 中考英语作文范文及评析：看图作文2

【习作要求】

　　看图组句
　　根据所给图画和提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑的四句话。每幅图只写一句话，所给提示词语必须都用上。（注意：只抄提示语不得分） 
 
提示：
　　（1）It was Tree Planting Day yesterday.
　　（2）early, morning, I, go, in my old clothes.
　　（3）we, help, each other, dig, hole, large enough, for, trees.
　　（4）plant, some, along, school, playground.
　　（5）from now on, water, tree, often, possible.

四 : 中考英语作文范文及评析：看图作文3

    【习作要求】

　　看图作文
　　根据图示，写一篇80词左右的短文。要求故事完整，句子通顺，内容与图片相符。 
 
　　参考词汇：newspaper (报纸)，bird (鸟)，nature (自然)

　　【参考范文】

　　One day my uncle was reading a newspaper and learned that birds were our friends. We should get alone well with them. He looked at his nice bird in the cage, and decided to let it fly back home-nature. He took the cage with the bird in it and went to a little hill near his house by bike. He went home with the empty cage. When he got back, he sat in a chair and had a rest. A moment later, to his surprise, he found the bird back in the cage.

　　【名师点评】

　　分析：该例四幅图画描述的是一位先生保护动物的故事，内容贴近考生的生活实际，有利于对考生进行保护生态平衡、保护地球环境的教育。内容要点是：
　　（1）看报（Let Birds Fly）；
　　（2）上山去放飞笼中鸟；
　　（3）提着空笼返家；
　　（4）惊奇地发现鸟儿重飞回笼。

　　通过观图、分析、判断，列出了要点，可写草稿，再进行润色，注意运用简单的、熟悉的句型结构，检查要点有无遗漏，注意拼写、词汇、语法及搭配上是否有误。

　　说明：看图作文是从直观入手，通过观察、分析、理解，运用联想，将图画语言转换成书面文字的写作过程。答题的思路和方法如下：首先，观察图画，弄清故事梗概。仔细观察每幅图画的内容，抓住图中的主要情节，把握关键的信息与联系，诸如人物、时间、地点、动作等。其次，明确信息，编拟提纲。经过认真的观察和分析，我们掌握了每幅图的主要信息。为了在表达中不漏要点，可为每幅图配上一个提纲性的句子，即用一句话表达这幅画的大意，这几句话实际上就是短文的写作提纲。有了提纲，我们在写作过程中就能做到重点突出，有条理，不会离题。再次，依据图示、提纲，连句扩写成篇。连句成文时，要按照一定的顺序和图画间的关系，中间加上一些符合逻辑关系的过渡词、句，从而使所写短文层次分明，内容连贯，浑然一体。同时注意尽可能运用简单易懂、自己熟悉的有把握的句型结构。最后，结合要求与图示，复查所写短文。写完短文后要检查格式、篇幅是否符合要求，文理是否通顺，要点有无遗漏，词汇、语法、搭配上是否有误，单词拼写有无错误等。

五 : 中考英语作文范文及评析：提示作文1

　　【习作要求】

　　马虎搞到两张全兴队对国安队的足球比赛入场券。他电话通知好友赵华洋，约他放学后在新华公园门口碰头，一起吃晚饭，然后去看球赛。二人在饭店美美吃了一顿，到付账时马虎才发现自己把钱夹忘在了家里，入场券也在他的钱夹中。

　　【学生习作】
　　Ma Hu got two tickets of (1) a wonderful football match between Quanxing and Guoan. He was thinking of invite (2) his good friend Zhao Huayang to watch it together. He gave him a call and told him to meet at the gate of Xinhua Park after class and then had dinner (3) together.

　　They met each other on time and had good dinner (4) in a restaurant. When the waiter brought them the bill. Ma Hu found that he left (5) his wallet at home. The two tickets kept (6) in the wallet, too.
（1）of在这里不是表示所有关系，所以应把of改成for，表示"用途"。
（2）动词invite在介词of的后面，应把它变为-ing形式。
（3）连词and连接的应该是两个并列的动词不定式，所以应把had改为to have。
（4）这里注意dinner前面有形容词修饰时，那么应在形容词前面加a。
（5）应把left改成had left。因为到"发现"时为止前面的动作已经完成，要用过去完成时态。
（6）此处是被动语态，应加上were。
 　　【名师点评】

　　这是一篇根据汉语提示写作的作文，也是中考题中常常采用的一种写作方式。写作中要求要点齐全，时态准确，短语、句型运用较为恰当即可得高分。本文要点齐全，较好地体现了写作要求。只是文中细小错误较多，这会影响获取高分。

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